Imami wrote:Jennifer wrote:回到家里，我呆坐了半天，是喜是悲，我分不清。
I had to back track to look for the earlier bits as I wasn't reading the pages closely. A good twist to the story from the third post onwards. The closing line is a surprise. Do tell us if teacher has any comments.
Edit to add: huh? So it wasn't by ah boy?!
Is the closing line acceptable? Hubby was laughing abt how I end the story. I also wonder what the reaction of the teacher would b if a student ends a compo in this manner. Does it sound rude or somehow inappropriate?