Young Writers Contest 2013-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

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Young Writers Contest 2013-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

Postby ChiefKiasu » Wed Dec 19, 2012 12:18 pm

Topic: "2013 and me"

Age Limit: 12 years old or younger (before 31 Dec 2012) (Birthday must be on or after 1st Jan 2000)

Closing date: The first 10 submissions after 31 Dec 2012 2359hrs

No. of qualifying submissions to date: 7

Judging period: 5 days after Closing date

Announcement of winner: 1 day after Judging Close

Prize: Apple iPad mini worth $448
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Rules: http://www.kiasuparents.com/kiasu/forum ... 88&t=47737

This contest is specifically intended for P3-P6 students. Get your child into the habit of writing!

Please post your entry to this thread.
Entries should start with the words:
"This is my submission for Writing Contest 2012-1
Birthday: {Your date of birth}
"

Note that ONLY winners of contests are required to send full identification information to me via email at (chiefkiasu@kiasuparents.com), including:
1) Name
2) Photocopy of NRIC
3) Birthdate
4) Email address
5) Contact number (I will call you to verify your age)

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Re: Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

Postby BigDevil » Mon Dec 31, 2012 10:33 am

DD actually wrote something for this contest, but this
busy father (read: lazy) has yet to vet, edit, nor type
it out. :oops:

Anyway, doesn't look like this contest is on since Chief's
target of having 10 entries is not likely to be met.

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Re: Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

Postby Sun_2010 » Mon Dec 31, 2012 11:55 am

BigDevil wrote:DD actually wrote something for this contest, but this
busy father (read: lazy) has yet to vet, edit, nor type
it out. :oops:

Anyway, doesn't look like this contest is on since Chief's
target of having 10 entries is not likely to be met.


BigD, nvm others still type it out. May be Chief will extend dead line. we will read and encourage :rahrah:

Chief, :please: can extend age group to below 12 or between 8-12 since P3s will complete 9 some time in 2013 only ie they are 8 only now?

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Re: Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

Postby Busymom » Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:12 pm

BigDevil wrote:DD actually wrote something for this contest, but this
busy father (read: lazy) has yet to vet, edit, nor type
it out. :oops:

Anyway, doesn't look like this contest is on since Chief's
target of having 10 entries is not likely to be met.


Are parents allowed to edit?

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Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me" by preciouslov

Postby preciouslove » Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:39 pm

This is my submission for Writing Contest 2012-1.
Birthday: {Your date of birth}


“Hi!” said a voice over the telephone. “Are you excited to go back to school?” “Of course!” I replied to my friend, Nadya. “Why?” she questioned. “I am excited as I am ready to bring down the top student to the pits!” I told her as a-matter-of-factly. It went quiet right after that reply then suddenly both of us let out a loud guffaw almost simultaneously. “Change the topic.” Nadya resumed, still giggling and trying to control her laughter. You see, the top student in our school has been the top student for the past 4 years. Yes indeed. Top in class and topped the level every single year. “Okay, how are your family members doing?” Nadya asked. “They’re all fine, thanks for asking.” I replied. She followed up with another question. “How are your siblings?” My answer was simple. “Annoying.” I told her, smiling wickedly to myself. “ The next reply from my best friend tickled me pink. She quipped, “I love my siblings and it brings me joy taking care of them. You, on the other hand, are more annoying than your siblings actually.” We hung up after quite a long conversation after which I felt that I was even more looking forward to go to school than ever.

Speaking of school, the words motivating me about school is ‘always do my best’ so though school life can be hectic, it is part and parcel of being in school. I cannot imagine not going to school, as I will definitely miss all the fun activities, interesting lessons and of course being with my hilarious friends. I am thankful my dad works so hard to pay for everything. Had it not been for him, I would not have new schoolbooks. I would have to make do with hand-me-down textbooks that belonged to my messy and irresponsible sister. Most of her books are dog-eared and doodled with the names of the boys she ever had a crush on. Yes, yuck. Rolling my eyes now. I may have to brave the hordes of other commuters who would be taking the same public bus as I do to go to school, instead of taking the school transport. Then, there is the ever so important pocket money, uniforms and so many other things that only money can buy. In exchange for daddy’s kind acts and all he had done for us, I would do my best in my studies and hopefully get some money from the government and share it equally among my five family members at the end of the year. *wink* Read : Edusave.

Then there’s my mom. My mom, she has a youthful face with light-brown shoulder length hair and is courteous, kind and smart. To put it simply, my mom is as pretty as a picture. She is what people call a stay-at-home-mom. SAHM for short. She needs to take charge of the house when daddy is working. I think mom is the best. She can really multi-task. I am blessed to have such a splendid mom. My mom is my personal chef and I always love to rate her dishes. I always encourage her to have her own cooking show because the dishes she whips up are always beyond expectations. Even without tuition, I have been able to manage so far with her as she has been a good teacher for me. She helps me with anything I am unsure of with regards to my studies. Well, almost anything except for bar modeling. Even so, I realized she bought guide books on bar modeling so we can learn together. How sweet of her. So come 2013, I would really love to have more time with her. I do understand that my baby brothers require more attention with my mom. I really DO understand. I know my mom is trying her very best to find time for me every day. Now that is what I call a daughter’s instinct. Not only mothers have an instinct. I honestly understand her hard life as the babies do not give her any peace. Poor mom. I really care for her so I try to be less annoying so she can refrain from nagging at me and also help out with the boys when I can.

Note to mom : No matter how much you nag at me, I know it is for my own good.

As for my sister whom I mentioned earlier, I just hope the New Year will bring a new attitude from her. Like being less lazy in her studies, not bullying me (at home or in school!), not bugging me with her constant and irritating singing and play her part at home being a good daughter to mommy and daddy and a good sister to all of us. Especially me. Even though she has been most mean to me, I wish her all the best for the BIG paper next year. You know? The one they call PSLE?

Now about the two annoying twits who take my time away from mom… For the elder, grow up already and go to school, scream less at me (I didn’t do anything to you except love you!) and I hope he does not give me a hard time next year. As for the cute yet troublesome little baby, I hope he sleeps longer! Especially, when I am bonding with mommy. I need bonding time! It is important for a growing girl like me.

Last but not least, ME! I will work harder to improve my studies even if I cannot beat the top student. My aim is to get Band 1 for all my subjects, if possible. I hope not to waste time cleaning up my room all the time which means I have to maintain the cleanliness of my room. I would like to be more responsible, to be less annoying (like I can?) and spend time with my love ones especially with my grandparents whom I affectionately call, ‘gramps’.

Note to self - Life is never fair. If there are obstacles that come my way, it is part and parcel of life. My mom once shared with me about overcoming obstacles. That it is not about how hard you fall but about how strong we rise up from the fall that matters.

There is no way to separate my family when I talk about myself because my family is a part of me. So 2013, here we come.

Submitted by precious love. (P3)
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Re: Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

Postby ChiefKiasu » Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:34 pm

We have extended the deadline the deadline to accept the 1st 10 entries starting from now, and changed the rule to remove the lower age limit. If your kids can write, let them write!

So quickly get your kids to polish up their masterpieces and submit before others do. Once we get 10 entries, the contest will be closed and the 3 best essays will be put up for voting. The one that garners the most online votes will be the winner of the iPad Mini! It's as simple as that.

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Re: Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me" by preciou

Postby ChiefKiasu » Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:38 pm

Hi preciouslove,

Thank you for your submission!

Can you update your submission with your full name and your age? We need it to verify your qualification. Thanks.

preciouslove wrote:This is my submission for Writing Contest 2012-1

Hi!” said a voice over the telephone. “Are you excited to go back to school?” “Of course!” I replied to my friend, Nadya. “Why?” she ...

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Re: Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

Postby BeContented » Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:45 pm

Precious Love only P3 can write like this.....even my P6 can't. :sweat:

I can't too...... :oops:

Kids go go go :rahrah: ......I look forward to read them and show them to my kids.

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Re: Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

Postby ChiefKiasu » Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:47 pm

Sun_2010 wrote:
BigDevil wrote:DD actually wrote something for this contest, but this
busy father (read: lazy) has yet to vet, edit, nor type
it out. :oops:

Anyway, doesn't look like this contest is on since Chief's
target of having 10 entries is not likely to be met.


BigD, nvm others still type it out. May be Chief will extend dead line. we will read and encourage :rahrah:

Chief, :please: can extend age group to below 12 or between 8-12 since P3s will complete 9 some time in 2013 only ie they are 8 only now?


Dear Sun_2010,

Yes, we have removed the lower age limit. As long as the child's birthday is after 1 Jan 2000, we will accept the submission.

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Re: Writing Contest 2012-1: Topic - "2013 and me"

Postby ChiefKiasu » Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:54 pm

Busymom wrote:
BigDevil wrote:DD actually wrote something for this contest, but this
busy father (read: lazy) has yet to vet, edit, nor type
it out. :oops:

Anyway, doesn't look like this contest is on since Chief's
target of having 10 entries is not likely to be met.


Are parents allowed to edit?


Yes. But it is easy to tell if the essay was actually written by a kid :) Trust me :evil:

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